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The line graph shows the sales of electric equipment in three companies between 2017 and 2020. It is clear that Loli decreased significantly over the period, whereas both Iedp and Karl saw a rapid increaseIn 2017, with 90 millions of USD of sales, Karl was the company with the most sales. After that, Karl's sales of electric equipment increased significantly from 90 to 110 millions of USD. Then, they hit a trough at 80 millions of USD in the next years and reached a peak at 120 millions of USD in 2020As far as we are concerned, the sales of Iedp company declined rapidly from 2107 to 2019. In 2017, Iedp witnessed 70 millions of USD and the number of sales decreased by 30 after 2 years. But they quickly grew in 2020 with 80 millions of USDLali's sales of electric equipment was similar over the period. The number of sales from the company began around 50 millions of USD and then gradually declined, reaching its lowest point around 40 millions of USD in 2020
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