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The bar graph represents the survey findings regarding percentage of residents preference on purchasing and consumption of tea and coffee in 5 Australian cities, namely Sysney, Melborne, Brisbain, Adelaide, and Hobart.

The bar graph represents the survey findings regarding percentage of residents preference on purchasing and consumption of tea and coffee in 5 Australian cities, namely Sysney, Melborne, Brisbain, Adelaide, and Hobart. GNRNx
The bar graph represents the survey findings regarding percentage of residents preference on purchasing and consumption of tea and coffee in 5 Australian cities, namely Sysney, Melborne, Brisbain, Adelaide, and Hobart. Overall, There are larger proportion of people drunk coffee or tea in cafe, followed by purchase of instant coffe and fresh coffee in last one month.
The bar graph represents the survey findings regarding percentage of residents preference on purchasing and consumption of tea and coffee in 5 Australian cities,
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Sysney
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Melborne
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Brisbain
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drunk coffee or tea in
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and fresh coffee in last one month.

IELTS academic The bar graph represents the survey findings regarding percentage of residents preference on purchasing and consumption of tea and coffee in 5 Australian cities, namely Sysney, Melborne, Brisbain, Adelaide, and Hobart.

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