Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In the following graphs we can identify the positions in the percentages of the level of education of children in 2002 and 2010.

In the following graphs we can identify the positions in the percentages of the level of education of children in 2002 and 2010. D692j
In the following graphs we can identify the positions in the percentages of the level of education of children in 2002 and 2010. We will mainly look at the differences in education between 2002 and 2010 based on computer ownership and the level of education in different school environments. And you will see it through a graph in which it is degreased with percentages that make you notice the difference between each year as it also has colors to distinguish. It can be seen that the computer ownership issue stands out too much in 2010 with a score higher than 60%, and the worst is 2002, since its score is less than 60%, if we go to the following graph we can see that it is the same problem so in conclusion 2002 is affected and the year 2010 had a higher performance in the educational level of computer ownership.
In the following graphs we can identify the positions in the percentages of the level of education of children in 2002 and 2010.

We will
mainly
look at the differences in education between 2002 and 2010 based on computer ownership and the level of education in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
school environments. And you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
it through a graph in which it
is degreased
with percentages that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you notice the difference between each year as it
also
has colors to distinguish.

It can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the computer ownership issue stands out too much in 2010 with a score higher than 60%, and the worst is 2002, since its score is less than 60%, if we go to the following graph we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that it is the same problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
in conclusion
2002 is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
and the year 2010 had a higher performance in the educational level of computer ownership.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic In the following graphs we can identify the positions in the percentages of the level of education of children in 2002 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    The table demonstrates the number of people suffering from Thyroid cancer in three age groups of adults, adolescents and children in Belarus after the catastrophe in Chernobyl over the 17 years period from 1986 to 2002.
    The table demonstrates the number of people suffering from Thyroid cancer in three age groups of adults, adolescents and children in Belarus after the catastrophe in Chernobyl over the 17 years period from 1986 to 2002. Overall, the number of adults, children and adolescents who became ill with canc...
  • 5.5band
    the proportion of alternative energy
    The bar chart below illustrates the proportion of alternative energy in total energy supply in 7 countries, saying Slovakia, USA, Japan, China, Greece, EU in two given years: 2005 and 2009. Overall, there is no significant difference of countries (USA, Japan, France) in use of renewable energy in 20...
  • 5.5band
    Islip Town Center Development Plan
    The first map provided here is the current layout of the Islip town center, however second map illustrates the upcoming development plan of the area. Overall, as per the new plan complete town center will be surrounded by a dual carriageway with major changes planned on the upper part of the town c...
  • 5.5band
    Olympic Game's participiants
    The two charts illustrates information about athletes and their gender's who have participated in the Olympics. The bar chart shows the number of men and women while the line graph describes the number of participants. It is evident from both of them between 1984 and 2012 there was a significant ri...
  • 5.5band
    The two charts about The Olympic Game's participants and genders
    The two charts illustrates information about athletes and their gender's who have participated in the Olympics. The bar chart shows the number of men and women while the line graph describes the number of participants. It is evident from both of them between 1984 and 2012 there was a significant ri...
  • 5.5band
    Household Budget Allocation
    The pi-charts illustrate how middle-class families had distributed their spendature in two different periods. It shows that housing, foods and clothes spending increased in the expense of vacation, leisure and the other needs. In 2012, housing takes about one third of budget while half of budget div...





Get more results for topic:
  • In the following graphs we can identify the positions in the percentages of the level of education of children in 2002 and 2010.