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The bar graph illustrates the rate of inhabitants over 65 years old in 4 various nations of Britain.

The bar graph illustrates the rate of inhabitants over 65 years old in 4 various nations of Britain. 2KBYw
The bar graph illustrates the rate of inhabitants over 65 years old in 4 various nations of Britain. Overall, it is evident that each of the four countries in Britain and the UK underwent an upward trend in their rates of residents over 65 years old. It is also noticeable that the ratio of people over 65 years old in Wales held the first rank in 1985 and still is predicted to take the lead in 2035 when compared with the others.
The bar graph illustrates the rate of inhabitants over 65 years
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in 4 various nations of Britain.

Overall
, it is evident that each of the four countries in Britain and the UK underwent an upward trend in their rates of residents over 65 years
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. It is
also
noticeable that the ratio of
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over 65 years
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in Wales held the
first
rank in 1985 and
still
is predicted
to take the lead in 2035 when compared with the others.
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates the rate of inhabitants over 65 years old in 4 various nations of Britain.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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