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The pie charts show the amount of revenue and expenditures in 2016 and for a children’s charity in the USA. Calibration of date is done in percentage. Overall, the total amount of income was just enough to cover the expenditures. Moreover, donated food made the highest share in total income while the maximum money spent on program service. To begin with, donated food provided the most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%. Similarly, with regard to expenditures, program services, calculated for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95. 8%. The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions were the second largest revenue source, brought in 10. 4% of overall income, and this was followed by program revenue, at 2. 2%. on the other hand, investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of revenue, accounting for only 0. 8% combined. There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, with a slight difference both accounting for 2. 6% and 1. 6% respectively.

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