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refurbishment happened in Ashdown Museum

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The given diagram, containing one table and two pie charts, reveals the impact of refurbishment happened in Ashdown Museum by comparing the visitors amount and satisfaction result before and after. Regarding to the table which calculates the annual amount of visitor, It witnessed a ascent by approximately 24% from 74000 to 92000 after renewal. As to the survey on satisfaction, the outcome seems more remarkable with the content feedback accounts for 75% and the only 20% goes to the not content. First of all, the negative feedback (“Dissatisfied ” and ”Very dissatisfied”) substantially descended. Before that, It is two and a half times as much as that of year after refurbished. One the other hand, the figure of people who feel satisfactory and above satisfactory has crept up by 30% with 20 % belongs to the latter. All in all, the benefit of refurnishing can be noticed apparently. To dig up, the influence on the satisfaction outweighs it on the visitor volume.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram, containing one table and two pie charts, reveals the impact of refurbishment happened in Possible spelling mistake found.Ash down
Ashdown
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before
 and after.

The phrase 'Regarding to' is not correct. Use "Regarding" or "regard to".RegardingRegard to
Regarding to
 the table which calculates the annual amount of visitor, It witnessed Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 ascent by approximately 24% from 74000 to 92000 after renewal.

As to the survey on satisfaction, the outcome seems more remarkable with the content feedback accounts for 75% and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 20% goes to the not content. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
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, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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and ”This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
Very
 dissatisfied”) substantially
 descended. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 that, It is two and a half times as much as that of year after refurbished. Did you mean "on"?On
One
 the other hand, the figure of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who feel satisfactory and above satisfactory has crept up by 30% with 20 % belongs to the latter.

All in all, the benefit of refurnishing can be noticed
apparently
. To dig up, the influence on the satisfaction outweighs it on the visitor volume. 