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The table shows monthly spending of an average Australian housholds from 1991,2001.

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The table compares the information about the monthly spending of an average Australian housholds which way divided into different categorics in the two years 1991 and 2001, in the terms of dollars. Overall, highest monthly Spending was experienced on the other goods and services in the both years, which was followed by the food, while lowest monthly spending was noticed on the clothing. A significant money was spent on others goods and services in the both years accounted for 250 in 1991, 270 in 2001. The second highest monthly spending was witnessed on the food that wats 155, 160 dollars respectively. In the terms of clothing, 30 dollars were spent, in the 1991 after 10 years spending declined by 10 dollars. In the year of 1991, the monthly expenditure on the electricity and water was 75 dollars, 120 dollars was spent in the 2001. In the case of housing and transfort money spent in the 1991 and 2001, recorded at 95, 100, 70, 45 respectively.
The table compares the information about the
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of an average Australian
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housholds
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in the two years 1991 and 2001, in the terms of
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Spending
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goods
and services in the both years accounted for 250 in 1991, 270 in 2001. The second highest
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wats
155, 160
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respectively
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were
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, in the 1991 after 10 years
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declined by 10 dollars.

In the
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of 1991, the
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expenditure on the electricity and water was 75
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, 120
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in the 2001.
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In
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money
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in the 1991 and 2001, recorded at 95, 100, 70, 45
respectively
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