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The bar graph below shows the water consumed by people in North Texas (in billions of gallons) from 2008-09 to 2013-14. The pie chart shows the distribution of water treated for consumption from August 2013 to July 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the water consumed by people in North Texas (in billions of gallons) from 2008-09 to 2013-14. The pie chart shows the distribution of water treated for consumption from August 2013 to July 2014. ndmbR
The bar grapgh depicts the information related to water consumed by people in North Texas from 2008-09 to 2013-14 and the pie chart depicts the distribution of water treated for consumption from August 2013 to July 2014. Overall, there is a decrease in consumption of water in the year 2013-14 when compared to the year 2008-09 and also majority of the water is consumed by member cities than customers. Firstly, 90 billions of gallons were consumed in the financial year 2008-09 and there was a spike in the consumption of water in the financial year 2010-11 which was close to 100 billions of gallons. From the year 2010-11, there was a downward trend in consumption of water in which every year there is some percentage decrease in consumption of water. Secondly, when comparing to the financial year 2008-12 there was a decrease in consumption of water in the financial year 2012-2014 and in the year 2013-2014, majority of the water consumptions is by member cities which was 83% and the customers consume only 17% of the overall water consumption.
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consumed by
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people
in North Texas from 2008-09 to 2013-14 and the pie chart depicts the distribution of
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water
treated for
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consumption
from August 2013 to July 2014.

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, there is a decrease in
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consumption
of
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water
in the
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year
2013-14 when compared to the
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year
2008-09 and
also
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majority of
the
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water
is consumed
by member cities than customers.

Firstly
,
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90 billions of
gallons
were consumed
in the
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financial
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year
2008-09 and there was a spike in the
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consumption
of
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water
in the
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financial
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year
2010-11 which was close to
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100 billions of
gallons. From the
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year
2010-11, there was a downward trend in
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consumption
of
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water
in which every
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year
there is
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some
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consumption
of water.

Secondly
, when comparing to the
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financial
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year
2008-12 there was a decrease in
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consumption
of
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water
in the
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financial
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year
2012-2014 and in the
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year
2013-2014,
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majority of
the
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water
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consumptions
is by member cities which was 83% and the customers consume
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only
17% of the
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water
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IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the water consumed by people in North Texas (in billions of gallons) from 2008-09 to 2013-14. The pie chart shows the distribution of water treated for consumption from August 2013 to July 2014.

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4 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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