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the map below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

the map below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. pqba
Given is a map illustrating a comparison of today's Islip town center with a proposed development plan. It is evident from the information supplied that the city will be changed significantly from a small area to a large modernized city. As shown by the present figure, the town is beside the countryside, and several shops alongside the only main road can be seen. Regarding the future plan, it can be seen that the town will expand and the countryside will disappear. Moreover, the main road will replace by pavement for pedestrians. Meanwhile, a huge shopping center among a bus station and parking space will be constructed in the north of the pavement. Due to population increase, new buildings will be built in both north-east and south-east of the Islip. Furthermore, the school will be larger, and on the other hand, the park will be smaller. Also noteworthy is that residents traveling will be better on the grounds of the construction of a new dual carriageway around the city.
Given
is a map illustrating a comparison of
today
's
Islip
town center with a proposed development plan.

It is evident from the information supplied that the city will be
changed
significantly
from a
small
area to a large modernized city.

As shown by the present figure, the town is beside the countryside, and several shops alongside the
only
main road can be
seen
.

Regarding the future plan, it can be
seen
that the town will expand and the countryside will disappear.
Moreover
, the main road will replace by pavement for pedestrians. Meanwhile, a huge shopping center among a bus station and parking space will
be constructed
in the north of the pavement. Due to population increase, new buildings will
be built
in both north-east and south-east of the
Islip
.
Furthermore
, the school will be larger, and
on the other hand
, the park will be smaller.
Also
noteworthy is that residents traveling will be better on the grounds of the construction of a new dual carriageway around the city.
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IELTS academic the map below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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