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The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

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The bar chart depicts amount of production and demand of electricity in different ten countries in the year 2014. Overall, as represent in bar chart, almost all countries power exceed demand except German and China has the highest electricity production and consumers whereas, Korea republic is at last on the list. To begin with, production of electricity is highest in China with 5, 398 billion KWh and it was followed by united states with its 4, 099 KWh production in 2014. However, expect these two big countries other countries production are less by more than by 4 times. Similarly, in Russia production was accounted 1, 057 KWh and Japan was in forth position following Russia by 936. 2 KWh. Whereas, Canada generated 618. 9 KWh in 2014 which is approximately 60 KWh more thaF France. Brazil and Gemany remain at around same line with 530. 7 and 526. 6 KWh production. Korea republic is the lowest in generating electricity by 485. 2 kWH. Turning to consumption ration, as pe the bar chart there is similarity in production and consumption ratio. China and united states had the highest users in 2014, which is recorded 5322 and 3866 KWh respectively. In contrast, Russia experience almost same of production and consumption and Germany users are higher than production. Similarly, Japan, India and Canada consumption rate was 856. 7, 698. 8 and 499. 9 (billion KWH), which is lower than production. France, Brazil and Korea Republic experience same amount of consumers in 2014, where Korea Republic is the lowest consumption of electricity in 2014
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power exceed demand except German and China has the highest
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rate was 856. 7, 698. 8 and 499. 9 (billion KWH), which is lower than
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. France, Brazil and Korea Republic experience same amount of consumers in 2014, where Korea Republic is the lowest
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