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The bar chart shows the spending of people in Viet Nam on different types of sports from 1960 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on four different types of sports over the course of 30 years, starting from 1990. Overall, the expenditure on Football was always higher than those of other categories. Additionally, an upward trend was seen in Walking and Boxing in comparison with other physical activities. In 1960, the spending on Football was the highest, which recorded at more than 6000. This figure began to decline sharply from above 6000 to 2700 in 1990. Similarly, the amount of money allocated for Scuba Diving experienced a slight decrease from roughly 2900 in 1960 to 1600 in 1990. In contrast, Vietnamese people spent the lowest amount of money on Boxing, with around 200 expended on this in 1960. In addition, this number went up marginally to approximately 1200 in 1990. Likewise, the money paid out for Walking rose rapidly from over 400 in 1960 to 2800 in 1990.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
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spent on four
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types of sports over the course of 30 years, starting from 1990.

Overall
, the expenditure on Football was always higher than those of other categories.
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, an upward trend was
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seen
in Walking and Boxing
in comparison
with other physical activities.

In 1960, the spending on Football was the highest, which recorded at more than 6000. This figure began to decline
sharply
from above 6000 to 2700 in 1990.
Similarly
, the amount of
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money
allocated for Scuba Diving experienced a slight decrease from roughly 2900 in 1960 to 1600 in 1990.

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, Vietnamese
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people
spent the lowest amount of
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money
on Boxing, with around 200 expended on this in 1960.
In addition
, this number went up
marginally
to approximately 1200 in 1990.
Likewise
, the
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paid out for Walking rose
rapidly
from over 400 in 1960 to 2800 in 1990.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the spending of people in Viet Nam on different types of sports from 1960 to 1990.

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