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The chart below shows Morocco’s income from different economic sectors in 2003 as well as its income from fishing from 1982 to 2003.

The given pie chart depicts the information about the proportion of income in morocco from six economic industries. The bar graph illustrates how much income contributed by the fishing sector. To commence with, it can be seen that more than quarter income was contributed by the tourism sector. Moreover, 24 percent of revenue was earned by manufacturing which was 3 percent more than work remittance sector. Petroleum and fishing trade were at the fourth and fifth number which contributed total 27 percent of profit. The least income was earned by the agriculture. Moving ahead, 42 billion dollars was accounted from the fishing business in 2003 which was the largest contribution in two decades. Furthermore, morocco earned less than billion from fishing sector in 1982 and this revenue was continued to increase until 2000. After that, profits remained similar for two years which was more than 3 billion dollar and in last year, it was nearly 2. 8 billion dollar. A myopic look at the graph, make its conspicuous that tourism was the highest profit sector among all six industries and fishing earned more money in middle of the 2 decades
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in morocco from six economic industries. The bar graph illustrates how much
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contributed by the
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fishing
sector.

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that more than quarter
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was contributed
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by manufacturing which was 3 percent more than work remittance
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. Petroleum and
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trade were at the fourth and fifth number which contributed total 27 percent of profit. The least
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was
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by the agriculture.

Moving ahead, 42
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dollars
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from the
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fishing
business in 2003 which was the largest contribution in two decades.
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, morocco
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less than
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from
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fishing
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in 1982 and this revenue
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and in last year, it was
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A myopic look at the graph,
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its conspicuous that tourism was the highest profit
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among all six industries and
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fishing
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more money in middle of the 2 decades
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IELTS academic The chart below shows Morocco’s income from different economic sectors in 2003 as well as its income from fishing from 1982 to 2003.

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