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Chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The illustrated pie charts demonstrate the proportion of water utilised for various purposes in six places of the world. Overall, it is notice that Europe consume the highest percentage of water for industrial purpose, whereas citizen of South America used highest proportion of water for domestic work as compared to other countries. Also residents use large amount of water for agriculture in Central Asia. It is vividly clear, that citizen of Europe utilise 53% of water for industrial work followed by the North America that is 48% however, residents of Central Asia use 5% of water in industrial work. Moreover, 88% of water is consumed by the inhabitants of Central Asia which is maximum by any country followed by Africa and South East Asia that is 84% and 81%, respectively. Moving further, Europe and North America are the countries which inhale the least amount of water for agriculture that is 32% and 39%, respectively. While 19% of water in South America is used for domestic work followed by Europe and North America, whereas Central Asia and South East Asia consume equal amount of water for household work that is 7%.
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for various purposes in six places of the world.
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, it is notice that Europe consume the highest percentage of
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water
for industrial purpose, whereas citizen of South America
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highest proportion of
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for domestic
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as compared to other countries.
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residents
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large amount of
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for agriculture in
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Central
Asia. It is
vividly
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53% of
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for industrial
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followed by the North America
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48%
however
, residents of
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Central
Asia
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5% of
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in industrial
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.
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, 88% of
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is consumed
by the inhabitants of
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Central
Asia which is maximum by any country followed by Africa and South East Asia
that is
84% and 81%,
respectively
. Moving
further
, Europe and North America are the countries which inhale the least amount of
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water
for agriculture
that is
32% and 39%,
respectively
. While 19% of
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in South America is
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for domestic
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followed by Europe and North America, whereas
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Central
Asia and South East Asia consume equal amount of
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for household
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that is
7%.
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IELTS academic Chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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