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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050. NQ3d

the bar chart indicates the proportion of people in 4 countries which is India, China, USA, Japan in 1950 and 2003, and predicted for 2050. overall, China was largest number of people in 1950 among 4 countries. However, It represented a sharp decline from 1950 to 2050 while India increased gradually and India India is going to highest in the figures Firstly, China started at around 23 percent of population inn 1950. It was rapid decreased by almost 3 percent in 1950 and 2002, it will go down to 15 percent in 2050. In contrast, proportion of number of Indian was a slow increase at 15 percentage to 17 percent in 2002. It will be most of large population in 4 countries. secondly, USA decline steadly by about 3 from 1950 to 2002. It became stayed remain in 2002 and 2050 while China and India have big various in their people rate. Japan is go down slightly just under 5 until 1 from 1950 to 2050.

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 in 4 countries which is India, China, USA, Japan in 1950 and 2003, and predicted for 2050.

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 in 1950 among 4 countries. However
, It represented a sharp decline from 1950 to 2050 while India increased gradually
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 is going to It seems that a verb is missing in front of the adjective "highest".be highest
highest
 in the figures

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 in 1950 and 2002, it will go down to 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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 in 2050. In contrast
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 in 2002. It will be Consider using "most large" or "most of the large".most largemost of the large
most of large
 population in 4 countries.

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 rate. Japan is go down slightly
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just
 under 5 until 1 from 1950 to 2050. 