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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 6rpG

The table chart illustrates the fluctuation in exports industry of major categories in the period of 2009 and 2010. Overall, metal and tele community industry witnessed the greatest changes of all areas while clothing and manufacturing experienced a slight drop. It is simply recognized that metals corporation had the significant enhance within the six fields by increasing double its value from 2. 3 to 5. 1 $HK billion which is 122%. Tele community also exported a large range of products result in 61 % growth in a year. On the other hand, there has been a relatively decline in garment service and mass production. Specifically, the industry of clothes went down 17% compared to the year before from 6 to 5 $HK billion while fabrication fell from 5. 5 to 4 $HK billion, that equal 27% revenue loss. All things considered, the total average value of 6 mentioned areas of Hong Kong gained 20 % raise from 2009 to 2010.

The table chart illustrates the fluctuation in exports industry of major categories in the period of 2009 and 2010.

Overall
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 of all areas while clothing and manufacturing experienced a slight drop.

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relatively decline
 in garment service and mass production. Specifically
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before
 from 6 to The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$5".$5
5 $
HK billion while fabrication fell from 5. 5 to The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$4".$4
4 $
HK billion, that equal 27% revenue loss. All things considered, the total average value of 6 mentioned areas of Hong Kong gained 20 % raise from 2009 to 2010. 