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The Bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European Country between 1971 and 2001.

The bar chart gives the information about the European people from 1971 to 2001 for growth of the number of cars per household. It is obvious that whereas the number of families who did not possess any cars went down, those who owned more than one car had changes and improved finally. It extremely seen that buying one car was likely to be the most beneficial in demand until 2001. At glance, nearly 47% of a whole European household without a car and 35% of those who gained up to the two or more cars. Therefore, from 1971 to 1981, the ratios of household having either one or not reduced slightly around by 5%. Hence, European people have at least two cars. However, the percentage of no car owning had continuously fall up to 30%. Although, the highest ratio of one car city resident had in 1991, this figure removes inconsiderably which seemed to 43%. Overall, apart from a negligible drop, the proportion of two or more cars in a European country had been support side by side.

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cars
 per household.

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cars
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owned
 more than one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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changes
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improved
finally
. It extremely
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seen
 that buying one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 was likely to be the most beneficial in demand until 2001.

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car
 and 35% of those who gained up to the two or more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. Therefore
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reduced
slightly
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people
 have at least two cars.

However
, the percentage of no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 owning had continuously
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fall
 up to 30%. Although, the highest ratio of one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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inconsiderably
 which seemed to 43%.

Overall
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cars
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