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The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the percentage of people in 3 age categories who watched various TV programs in a European country in 2012. Overall, the rate of people prefered news programs increased with the advancement of age, while the cartoons one shows a adverse trend. If we look at details, 29% children from 11 to 15 mostly liked to watch cartoons, which was comparble to 22% in sport. There were 1% difference between feature films (18%) and soap opera (17%). Tv dramas and news just were selected by 8% and 6% respectively. Moreover, in the age group between 21 and 25 almost all television programmes were famous among the masses, except cartoons ( only by 4%). Furthermore, the popularity of feature films were more rather than soap opera in age group of 16 to 30, 23% and 12% respectively. The same percentage of multitudes could be noticed who were saw cartoons and sports with 18%. News channels were being seen by 19%, while TV dramas was the least favourite program made up at 10% only.
The table illustrates the percentage of
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people
in 3
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age
categories who
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watched
various TV programs in a European country in 2012.
Overall
, the rate of
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people
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prefered
news programs increased with the advancement of
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age
, while the
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cartoons
one
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shows
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adverse trend. If we look at
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details
, 29% children from 11 to 15
mostly
liked to
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watch
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cartoons
, which was
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to 22% in sport. There were 1% difference between feature films (18%) and soap opera (17%).
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Tv
dramas and news
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were selected
by 8% and 6%
respectively
.
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, in the
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age
group between 21 and 25 almost all television
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programmes
were
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famous
among the masses, except
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cartoons
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only
by 4%).

Furthermore
, the popularity of feature films were more
rather
than soap opera in
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age
group of 16 to 30, 23% and 12%
respectively
. The same percentage of multitudes could
be noticed
who were
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saw
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cartoons
and sports with 18%. News channels were being
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seen
by 19%, while TV dramas was the least
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program made up at 10%
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only
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IELTS academic The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012.

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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