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The diagram below shows how the online food delivery applications work.

The flowchart illustrates the process of ordening food online through intornet. Overall, aul the steps are conducted online, while the delivery of food is offline process even the time consumed in this pro cess is crucial, as it shows the quality of the service. A glance at the flowchart, the customer first browse on the food portal then search for the desired food as well as select the food together with required quantity. Once the order is finalised, payment should be done by the customer either by net banking or card services which then start the main procedure. Then the final list goes to the Restaurant along with the payment to online store owner The amount is transfered further to the Merchant after deducting the owner's commission. After that the meal is prepared and delivered by the Merchant on third party to the customer. The delivery is finally received by the customer.
The flowchart illustrates the process of
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ordening
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food
online through
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intornet
.
Overall
,
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the steps
are conducted
online, while the delivery of
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food
is offline process even the time consumed in this
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pro cess
is crucial, as it
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shows
the quality of the service.

A glance at the flowchart, the
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customer
first
browse on the
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food
portal then search for the desired
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food
as well
as select the
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food
together with required quantity. Once the order is
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finalised
, payment should
be done
by the
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customer
either by net banking or card services which then
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start
the main procedure. Then the final list goes to the Restaurant along with the payment to online store owner The amount is
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transfered
further
to the Merchant after deducting the owner's commission. After that the meal
is prepared
and delivered by the Merchant on third party to the
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customer
. The delivery is
finally
received by the
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customer
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the online food delivery applications work.

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