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he diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture below describes how ethanol fuel created from corn, there are 9 steps from based corn to ethanol fuel. The most crucial part is the separating fermented corns to purifying that transforms to ethanol. The first process is storing which are raw corns check for it's quality and then the second is milling, that take part to clean the corns from dust and dirt. Furthermore, the clean corns get cooked up to 4 hours and at this stage it combined with water. After that process, the corns go through the fermenting stage, which is take almost 2 days for this step. However, in separating room the corns divided by solid and liquid products, in addition to that the liquid continue to the purifying ethanol process that took 5 hours. Finally the fuel get stored and transported when there are any request for more ethanol. In conclusion, there are 9 stages to created ethanol fuel, that took almost 4 days for the ethanol completely ready to use.
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how
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ethanol
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fuel
created from
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corn
, there are 9 steps from based
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corn
to
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ethanol
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fuel
. The most crucial part is the separating fermented
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corns
to purifying that transforms to ethanol.

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corns
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for it's quality
and then the second is milling, that
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take part
to clean the
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corns
from dust and dirt.
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, the clean
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corns
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get
cooked up to 4 hours and at this stage it combined with water. After that process, the
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corns
go through the fermenting stage, which is take almost 2 days for this step.
However
, in separating room the
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corns
divided by solid and liquid products,
in addition
to that the liquid continue to the purifying
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ethanol
process that took 5 hours.
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the
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fuel
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stored and transported when there are any request for more
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ethanol
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ethanol
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, that took almost 4 days for the
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completely ready to
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use
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