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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams illustrate the changes that happened in road access to a city hospital in 2010 compared to 2007. Overall, new constructions were built around hospital road in the year 2010, as well as some changes in previous facilities and even the road itself are seen. Regarding the road construction, intersections between hospital road and ring road and also between hospital road and city road in the year 2007, was converted to a roundabout in 2010. Moreover, two roads were added from two squares to the new bus station. Turning to the changes relating to specific places, in 2007, there was one shared car park for staff and the public at East side of Hospital road. In addition, one part of that had shared with the bus station too. In 2010, whilst, the bus station was completely separated and placed at the West of that road and the previous car park was assigned to staff. Also, new public parking was built on the East side of the city hospital and possessed an entrance from the Ring road.
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that happened in
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access to a city
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hospital
in 2010 compared to 2007.

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, new constructions
were built
around
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hospital
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road
in the year 2010,
as well
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some
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changes
in previous facilities and even the
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road
itself are
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seen
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Regarding the
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construction, intersections between
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hospital
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road
and ring
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road
and
also
between
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hospital
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road
and city
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road
in the year 2007,
was converted
to a roundabout in 2010.
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roads
were
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added
from two squares to the new bus station.

Turning to the
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changes
relating to specific places, in 2007, there was one shared car park for staff and the public at East side of
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Hospital
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road
.
In addition
, one part of that had shared with the bus station too. In 2010, whilst, the bus station was completely separated and placed at the West of that
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road
and the previous car park
was assigned
to staff.
Also
, new public parking
was built
on the East side of the city
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hospital
and possessed an entrance from the Ring
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road
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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