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The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. nyDR
The bar chart in the up illustrates the average monthly spending money of a family within the U. S. A about 3 items which are food, gas, and clothing. Overall, it seems there are some fluctuations in monthly expenses. As time passed every each of them has changed. The amount In January for food is almost 450 dollars. Then in February, it has increased by about 580. In March it has a bit decreased approximately to 430 dollars. When it comes to the last month which is April, it is around 310 dollars. Well, the percentage of dollars for spending money is about 350 dollars in January. Then, in February it seems a little diminished to about 220 dollars. İn March it has increased again to about 330 dollars. Finally, in April there are big differences. It has boosted the most amount which is around 480 dollars. At the same time, it is the biggest amount of all time. There are so many instabilities. When it comes to clothing, we see that clothing has some variations. It is about 220 dollars in January. İn February it has boosted a lot to around 590 dollars. According to March, it seems almost 320 dollars. In April, it is approximately 640 dollars.
The bar chart in the up illustrates the average monthly spending money of a family within the U. S. A about 3 items which are food, gas, and clothing.

Overall
, it seems there are
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fluctuations in monthly expenses.
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time passed every each of them has
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The amount In January for food is almost 450
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dollars
. Then in February, it has increased by about 580. In
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March it
has a bit decreased approximately to 430 dollars.

When it
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comes
to the last month which is April, it is around 310 dollars.

Well, the percentage of
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dollars
for spending money is about 350
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dollars
in January. Then, in February it seems a
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diminished to about 220
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has increased again to about 330 dollars.

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inally,
in April there are b
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differences. It has boosted the most amount which is around 480
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. At the same time, it is the biggest amount of all time. There are s
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m
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instabilities.

When it c
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to clothing, we s
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that clothing has s
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variations. It is about 220
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dollars
in January.
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February it has boosted a lot to around 590
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dollars
. According to March, it seems almost 320
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. In April, it is approximately 640
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010.

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