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How are bottles produces and what is their whole process

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Here we will try to explain how bottles are done. The first step is to have the glucose extracted from harvest cereals by a huge machine. Once we have the glucose extracted, we can continue the process; we shall ferment it into polymers, afterwards, those polymers are turned into bottles, then we get the product; bottles, but the process have not come to an end yet. Once we have already used the bottles, we shall, probably, throw them into the rubbish, then it can meet two fates: it ends in a landfill or get recycled.
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IELTS academic How are bottles produces and what is their whole process

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