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Wheat Exports of Australia, Canada and European community

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The line graph compares the wheat exports from Australia, Canada and European community during 1985-1990. Overall, the exports of the all the there were around 15-20 million tons in 1985. Post that we can see the fluctuations from 1986-1990. The exports of Australia have seen a rise in 1986 and after that we can see the steady decline till 1989. In 1989 and 1990 the exports were little above 10 million tons. In 1986 both Canada and European community has seen a decline in exports. For Canada there is a huge rise from 1986-1988 and a steep decline in 1989. In 1990 it raised to just bellow 20 million tons which is similar to its 1985 figures. Whereas for European Community there is a very little upward trend from 1986-1988 and a sudden increase in 1989-1990 and settles at 21 million tons.
The line graph compares the wheat
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from Australia, Canada and European community during 1985-1990.

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, the
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of the all the there were around 15-20
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million
tons in 1985. Post that we can
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the fluctuations from 1986-1990.

The
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of Australia have
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a rise in 1986 and after that we can
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the steady decline till 1989. In 1989 and 1990 the
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were
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above 10
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million
tons. In 1986 both Canada and European community has
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a decline in exports.

For Canada there is a huge rise from 1986-1988 and a steep decline in 1989. In
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1990 it
raised to
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bellow 20
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tons which is similar to its 1985 figures. Whereas for European Community there is a
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upward trend from 1986-1988 and a sudden increase in 1989-1990 and settles at 21
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tons.

IELTS academic Wheat Exports of Australia, Canada and European community

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