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the changes in Dubai in recent decades

the changes in Dubai in recent decades 6KJ9W
the two maps illustrate the changes have occured during recent decades. at the first glance, it is clear that the city has become more urbunized and developed. the old city was just like a desert but today it has transformed completely. it seems that through investing and having more tourist attractions, more and more inhabitants have come to this metropolis. as you can see in the first picture, there are just two or three block buildings and also a bangalow which all of them have been demolished and replaced by a lot of skyscrapers similarly the roads have been expanded through cutting all rows of trees beside the roads however many pine trees have been introduced in the roundabout. moreover, you van imagine different pollutions like air pollution, sound pollution due to the population and the number of cars in the streets. in fact the only thing that has been remained the same, is the clock tower in the middle of the Roundabout. Overall, Dubai has developed dramatically in most fields which will couse more facilities and also more problems for the residents.
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changes
have
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occured
during recent decades.
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at
the
first
glance, it is
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clear
that the city has become more
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urbunized
and developed.
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the
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old
city was
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just
like a desert
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but
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today
it has transformed completely.
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it
seems that through investing and having more tourist attractions, more and more inhabitants have
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come
to this metropolis.
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as
you can
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see
in the
first
picture, there are
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just
two or three block buildings and
also
a
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bangalow
which all of them have
been demolished
and replaced by
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a lot of
skyscrapers
similarly
the roads have
been expanded
through cutting all rows of trees beside the roads
however
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many
pine trees have
been introduced
in the roundabout.

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moreover
, you van imagine
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different
pollutions like air pollution, sound pollution due to the population and the number of cars in the streets.

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in
fact the
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only
thing that has
been remained
the same, is the clock tower in the middle of the Roundabout.

Overall
, Dubai has developed
dramatically
in most fields which will
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couse
more facilities and
also
more problems for the residents.

IELTS academic the changes in Dubai in recent decades

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183 words
6.0
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