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Ielts Writing Task 1 Pie chart

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Academic writing task 1 The pie chart compares five different categories of household expenditure in UK and New Zealand in the years 1980 and 2008. It is noticable that, there was a sharply decrease the category of food and drink in 2008. In 2008, household spents more money in recreation which was rose 34% and it was established a high proportion. In1980, 29% of an average New Zealands hoseholds budget went on food and drink, while the equivalent of UK. By 2008, expenditure of food and drink had fallen 4% in UK. At this time, there was a rise in utility bills 27% to 31%in New Zealand, 26% to 28% in UK. Leisure activities accounted the highest proportion in UK, which was 34%. Transport costs and other costs was an only roughly 15% and 10% household budgets respectively/

Academic writing task 1

The pie chart compares five This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 categories of household expenditure in UK and New Zealand in the years 1980 and 2008.

It is Possible spelling mistake found.noticeable
noticable
 that, there was a You used an adverb ('sharply') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
sharply decrease
 the category of food and drink in 2008. In 2008, household Possible spelling mistake found.spentspendsscentsstents
spents
 more money in recreation which was rose 34% and it was established
 a high proportion.

In1980, 29% of an average New Possible spelling mistake found.Zealand'sZealand
Zealands
Possible spelling mistake found.householdshose holds
hoseholds
 budget went on food and drink, while the equivalent of UK. By 2008, expenditure of food and drink had fallen 4% in UK. At this time, there was a rise in utility bills 27% to 31%in New Zealand, 26% to 28% in UK.

Leisure activities accounted the highest proportion in UK, which was 34%. Transport costs and other costs was an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 roughly 15% and 10% household budgets respectively
/