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The bar chart represents the proportion of population settling in urban regions of different continents in 1950 and compares to that in 2007.

The bar chart represents the proportion of population settling in urban regions of different continents in 1950 and compares to that in 2007. In addition, it makes conjecture percentage in 2030. In general, there is a dramatic increase in the percentage of urban population between 1950 and 2007 and that is predicted to have an upward trend in 2030. It is clear that Africa and Asia made up lower proportion than that of the world while the others had the bulk of the population in their urban areas. As can be seen, Asia and Africa had a similar percentage and tendency. In Africa, the percentage of urban population sharply rose from 15% to 37%, compares to that in Asia which augmented for 17% and 41% in 1950 and 2007 respectively. Besides, the projection for 2030 indicates above a half of people in their continents will reside in urban areas. In contrast, the other continents accounted for a higher percentage than the average level of the world. In detail, 42%, 51% and 64% of Europe, Latin America Caribbean and North America respectively while the world just attained 29% in 1950. In the next 57 years, three-fourths of their population lived in urban areas and those are forecast to reach approximately 80% urban population, higher 20% than that percentage of the world.
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settling in
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urban
regions of
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different
continents in 1950 and compares to that in 2007.
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, it
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conjecture
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percentage
in 2030.

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, there is a dramatic increase in the
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percentage
of
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urban
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population
between 1950 and 2007 and that
is predicted
to have an upward trend in 2030. It is
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clear
that Africa and Asia made up lower proportion than that of the
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world
while the others had the bulk of the
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population
in their
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urban
areas.

As can be
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seen
, Asia and Africa had a similar
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percentage
and tendency. In Africa, the
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percentage
of
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urban
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population
sharply
rose from 15% to 37%, compares to that in Asia which augmented for 17% and 41% in 1950 and 2007
respectively
.
Besides
, the projection for 2030 indicates above a half of
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people
in their continents will reside in
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urban
areas.

In contrast
, the other continents accounted for a higher
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percentage
than the average level of the
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world
. In detail, 42%, 51% and 64% of Europe, Latin America Caribbean and North America
respectively
while the
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world
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just
attained 29% in 1950.
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the
next
57 years, three-fourths of their
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lived
in
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areas and those are forecast to reach approximately 80%
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urban
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population
, higher 20% than that
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IELTS academic The bar chart represents the proportion of population settling in urban regions of different continents in 1950 and compares to that in 2007.

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6.5
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