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The bar chart illustrating information about percentage of people who got married

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The bar charts illustrates information about percentage of people who got married from 1996 to 2006 on the basis of different age groups in one countryOverall it is crystal clear that in younger age group more number of female got married in 1996 older age group in 2006 with a small number of marriages among male and female in comparison to 2006There were only girls getting married in 6219 age group accounting for 1% in 1996 and 0. 6% in 2016 respectively 6% of female and 2% of male got married in 1996 belonging to 20 to 25 age group while this with the decreased to the present for female and 1. 8 % for male for the same in 2006 similarly 25 to 29 age group followed the same trend which remained the same for female and decreased to 8% for male in 2006Probing for the 7% of female and 9% of male of 30 to 35 age category got married in 1996 the percentage of increase in marriages was 8 percentage for male or female and 11% for male for present president of female and 7% of male of 35 239 age groups got married in 1996 which increased by 1% for both male and female for the same age group after the 1 decade period there was a slight increase in female and male marriages in 40 to 45 age group by 0. 3 % and 2% respectively

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