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The diagrams below sive information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.

The diagrams below sive information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. eDN7

The given diagram illustrates that there are a number of processes in preparing production of frozen fish pies. Overall it can be clearly seen that, according to picture main ingredients are fish, potatoes and souce as well as there are the steps involved in the product preparation and package of products. To begin with, the potatoes which may have been up to mounth are cleaned and peeled. In the next stage, it is cut into slices and the slices are boiled and then it is chilled before being stored carefully. Coming to the fish preparation, Fistly salmon is added with salt and lemon juice. Afterwards, it is cooked by being steamed. Then the skin and bones are removed by hand before it is controlled visually quality of work. At the next point, the pies and souce which have already been prepared are added to fish. And they are wrapped into boxes and frozen. Finally the production are ready for dispatch or it may be stored at the factory

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