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The bar chart illustrates the number of student applications in 4 faculty areas

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The bar chart illustrates the number of student applications in 4 faculty areas (Biology, Engineering, Business, Social Work) in each period. Overall, in 1990 the Engineering department had the most application than other areas whereas Business was the most popular in 2000 and 2010. All areas had a number of fluctuations. In terms of Biology, in 1990 had 3000 pupil application while this number fell in half in 2000 and then it decreased to merely under 1000. Similarly, the Engineering department had the most number in 1990 which is exactly 4000 whereas it reduced to 2500 in 2000. Furthermore, Engineering had the least number of applications throughout the period which was about 600.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of student
applications
in 4 faculty areas (Biology,
Engineering
, Business, Social Work) in each period.

Overall
, in 1990 the
Engineering
department had the most
application
than other areas whereas Business was the most popular in 2000 and 2010. All areas had a
number
of fluctuations.

In terms of Biology, in 1990 had 3000 pupil
application
while this
number
fell in half in 2000 and then it decreased to
merely
under 1000.
Similarly
, the
Engineering
department had the most
number
in 1990 which is exactly 4000 whereas it
reduced
to 2500 in 2000.
Furthermore
,
Engineering
had the least
number
of
applications
throughout the period which was about 600.
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