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Lockdown As a robot I want the lockdown to be in such a manner that it gives fruitful result to the people of India.

Lockdown As a robot I want the lockdown to be in such a manner that it gives fruitful result to the people of India. 8agAk

Lockdown As a robot I want the lockdown to be in such a manner that it gives fruitful result to the people of India. In this essay we are going to see good ideas which strictly adheres to the rules and regulations. Firstly, order for more numbers of mini ambulances for non-covid patients. This is owing to the fact that it will reduce movement of people for medical treatment reasons. Mini ambulances comprises of one doctor and staff nurse with all nursery setups it will move in the local areas. Toll free numbers will be given for respective ailments. For illustration if an heart patient is required angioplast surgery he can call the respective Toll free number say 1091 immediately mini ambulance will be near to his or her home and do what it is required. Secondly, have to prepare time table for essential shops like Provision Stores, Vegetable shops and Petrol bunks. For instance, in each area from Monday to Saturday alternative days this three shops will be open. Like, Provision shops on monday and wednesday from 6. 00 am to 10. 00 am, Vegetable shops public can access Tuesday and Thursday, and petrol bunks work from 6. 00 am to 6. 00 pm Friday and Saturday only. Finally, to conclude public will fix their minds accordingly and practice in their day to day life. Both Government and Public can easily won the battle against Covid the pandemic. A successful lockdown can be carry forward for continuous 14 days without any disruption.

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Firstly
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non-covid
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reduce
 movement of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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comprises of
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move
 in the local areas. Toll free numbers will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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ambulance
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his or her
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have to
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shops
 like Provision Stores, Vegetable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 and Petrol bunks. For instance
, in each area from Monday to Saturday alternative days this three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
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shops
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Finally
, to conclude
 public will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 their minds accordingly
 and practice in their It appears that two hyphens are missing.day-to-day
day to day
 life. Both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 and Public can easily
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won
 the battle against Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid
 the pandemic. A successful lockdown can be carry forward for continuous 14 days without any disruption. 