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The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students selecting six major subjects in a US college in the year 2010

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The bar chart compares the preference of students at a US university in 2010 in six main majors. It is clear from graph that the number of students choosing finance and engineering is nearly equal in males and females, compared with the disparity in other areas. A closer look at the finance area shows that male and female students have the same number approximately 230, which is also the highest number on record. By contrast, the number of students selecting engineering is just over 50 students in both sexes. Turning to other subjects, we can see that economics and mathematics attract more male than female students. The figure for male mathematics students was 200, as against just only 60 female students. The statistic for male economics scholars was almost twice as higher as female economics students. The opposite trend can be seen in marketing and accounting, female scholars tend to select two subjects more than male scholars. 130 and 80 students are the numbers of females and males choosing marketing. Similarly, in accounting, the figure for female students is 30 higher than male students.

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