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The bar chart illustrates how someland’s main exports three different products meat, dairy, international tourism in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025

The bar chart illustrates how someland’s main exports three different products meat, dairy, international tourism in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025 PE1WB
The bar chart illustrates how someland’s main exports three different products meat, dairy, international tourism in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025. overall, Generali, international tourism is the highest export product. It is clear that over the time meat products exports will be decreased than 2005 level. Dairy products in 2005 was the highest export products while in future it will go down. According to the bar chat, in 2005, we can see that tourism was the greatest exports earner of the three industries, with revenue standing at just over $6 billion. this figure has increased slightly, so that now, in 2015, it has reached almost $7 billion. It is estimated that international tourism will continue to grow, so that by 2025, it will be earning around $8 billion for the country. But dairy products rise in 2005 to 2015 about 3 billion, in 2005 it was 5 billion and 2015 it was almost 8 billion, but in 2025 it will be decrease a little. Meat products are the third key industry, but sales have dropped since 2000 and now stand at $3. 5 billion. It is expected that sales will continue to decrease in the future.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates how someland’s main exports three different products meat, dairy, international tourism in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025

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