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Mechanism of Wave Energy Machines

Mechanism of Wave Energy Machines nEAGE
The diagram shows the comparison of Wave Energy Machines locations and its machenism. As we can clearly see the installation cost is cheaper and produces less output and small waves near the sea level. If we go deeper the installation cost are high and produces larger waves and higher output. It is clearly obvious that at a deeper sea level the waves are much higher then the beach shore and which produce more output and is higher in installation since the dept of the sea level increases. The higher the wave will be the more airflow will be there through the chambers which will result in more turbine speed. Since the wave eneregy machine is directly proportional to the wave size the higher the wave will be the more energy it produce and the more the turbine rotates the more energy will be produced
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the comparison of
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Energy Machines locations and its
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the installation cost is cheaper and
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produces
less output and
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small
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waves
near the sea level. If we go deeper the installation cost are high and
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produces
larger
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waves
and higher output. It is
clearly
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waves
are much
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the beach shore and which
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produce
more output and is higher in installation since the dept of the sea level increases. The higher the
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wave
will be the more airflow will be there through the chambers which will result in more turbine speed. Since the
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wave
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eneregy
machine is
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proportional to the
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size the higher the
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wave
will be the more energy it
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produce
and the more the turbine rotates the more energy will be
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produced
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IELTS academic Mechanism of Wave Energy Machines

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