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Process diagram about the production of leather items

Process diagram about the production of leather items 6LWk3
The provided pictorial diagram represents the information related to the production of leather items. This process consists of several stages. In the first step, the drying of animal skin has been done in the open environment. Then, truckloads the tank which is full filled with the combination of water and lime to our factory. After this, animal washing is followed under the mixture of water and lime and it is a louder to soak in the lime solution. After that, flattening of skin is carried out with the help of our machine. Now switching towards the remaining details, in this step, then it is performed by soaking animal skin in the water and vegetable matter. By following this step, the polishing of skin material has been done. Penultimately, This polish the material is carried by the auto mobile to the factory. Ultimately, this material is used for the production of leather ones in the factory. In the end, leather goods such as shoes, handbags, Balls and many more are manufactured. Overall, this manufacturing per season starts with drying of animal skin and ends with the production of leather materials main ingredient that are required to perform this process such as water animal skin line and vegetable matter.
The provided pictorial diagram represents the information related to the production of
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leather
items. This process consists of several stages. In the
first
step, the drying of
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animal
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skin
has
been done
in the open environment. Then, truckloads the tank which is full filled with the combination of
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water
and lime to our factory. After this,
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animal
washing
is followed
under the mixture of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
and lime and it is a louder to soak in the lime solution. After that, flattening of
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skin
is carried
out with the
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help
of our machine.
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Now
switching towards the remaining
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details
, in this step, then it
is performed
by soaking
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animal
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skin
in the
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water
and vegetable matter. By following this step, the polishing of
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skin
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material
has
been done
.
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Penultimately
, This polish the
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material
is carried
by the auto mobile to the factory.
Ultimately
, this
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material
is
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used
for the production of
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leather
ones in the factory. In the
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end
,
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leather
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goods
such as shoes, handbags, Balls and
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many
more
are manufactured
.
Overall
, this manufacturing per season
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starts
with drying of
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animal
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skin
and ends with the production of
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leather
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materials
main ingredient that
are required
to perform this process such as
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water
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animal
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skin
line and vegetable matter.
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IELTS academic Process diagram about the production of leather items

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