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The chart below gives information about Southland's main export in 2000, 2021 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main export in 2000, 2021 and future projections for 2025. JoKeE
The bar chart provides information about major transports in southland in 2000, 2021 and the future expectation in 2025. In general, international tourism is the highest earning export throughout the year while the meat products are the smallest. At first, the international tourism as the majority of main export has spent 8 billion euros whilst meat product was the least which only earned 6 billion euros in 2000. However, the dairy product was the highest export with the total income of almost 10 billion euros whereas, the meat production was still the smallest with the decline of about 0, 5 billion euros. In addition, the chart includes data of future expectations of exports in 2025 which is international tourism will peak at nearly 10 billion euros. Furthermore, dairy products will become the second-highest with total revenue of about 9, 5 billion euros, and the minority product which already predicted will experience another fall of half a billion euros.
The bar chart provides information about major transports in
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in 2000, 2021 and the future expectation in 2025.
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, international tourism is the highest earning
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export
throughout the year while the meat
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products
are the smallest.

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, the international tourism as the majority of main
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export
has spent 8
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euros whilst meat
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was the least which
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was the highest
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export
with the total income of almost 10
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billion
euros whereas, the meat production was
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the smallest with the decline of about 0, 5
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billion
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In addition
, the chart includes data of future expectations of
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exports
in 2025 which is international tourism will peak at
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10
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billion
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Furthermore
, dairy
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will become the second-highest with total revenue of about 9, 5
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billion
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which already predicted will experience another fall of half a
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