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The bar chart given illustrates data regarding how much money each family in the US spent on five various categories in two years, 2010 and 2014.

The bar chart given illustrates data regarding how much money each family in the US spent on five various categories in two years, 2010 and 2014. 6dRmj
The bar chart given illustrates data regarding how much money each family in the US spent on five various categories in two years, 2010 and 2014. Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that while the per household’s spending on food and smartphones in the US saw an increase, these figures in books declined. Besides, a stability was witnessed in the money each household in the US used to buy Clothes and Toiletries. Another key feature is that the highest figures for the amounts of money per household spent on 5 different products in the US were recorded in the food item. In 2010, the per American family spending on Foods and Smartphones made up around 3700 million dollars and exactly 2500 million dollars respectively. These figures increased respectively to 4400 million dollars and about 2700 million dollars by 2014. An opposite trend was experienced at the expense of every family in the US on Books. Starting from 1000 million dollars in 2010 and decreased sharply by 500 million dollars in 2014. 2500 million dollars was the money each household spent on Clothes in The US in 2010 before remaining unchanged until 2014. Alongside the money per household used to buy Toiletries saw a somewhat similar tendency. It began with around 1900 million dollars by 2010 and almost remaining unchanged in 2014
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illustrates data regarding how much
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each family in the US spent on five various categories in two years, 2010 and 2014.

Looking at the chart, it is immediately
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that while the per
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household’s
spending on food and smartphones in the US
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an increase, these figures in books declined.
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each
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household
in the US
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to
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buy
Clothes and Toiletries. Another key feature is that the highest figures for the amounts of
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money
per
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household
spent on 5
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different
products in the US
were recorded
in the food item.

In 2010, the per American family spending on Foods and Smartphones made up around 3700
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million
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dollars
and exactly 2500
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million
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dollars
respectively
. These figures increased
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to 4400
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million
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and about 2700
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million
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dollars
by 2014. An opposite trend
was experienced
at the expense of every family in the US on Books. Starting from 1000
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million
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in 2010 and decreased
sharply
by 500
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million
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in 2014.

2500
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was the
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each
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spent on Clothes in The US in 2010
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remaining unchanged until 2014. Alongside the
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money
per
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household
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to
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Toiletries
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a somewhat similar tendency. It began with around 1900
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by 2010 and almost remaining unchanged in 2014
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