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The bar chart given illustrates data regarding how many people worked part-time jobs in four countries in two years 1980, 2010.

The bar chart given illustrates data regarding how many people worked part-time jobs in four countries in two years 1980, 2010. k5qnR

The bar chart given illustrates data regarding how many people worked part-time jobs in four countries in two years 1980, 2010. Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that while the percentage of people who had part-time jobs in England and Scotland saw a significant increase, the proportion of people working part-time in Northern Ireland fluctuated. Another key feature is that the highest figures for people doing part-time work were recorded in Wales. In 1980, 25% of people in England worked part-time. This figure rose to more than 30% by 2010. A similar increase was seen in the rate of part-time workers in Scotland. Starting from about 11% in 1980, this figure witnessed a rise of 8% until 2010. In 1980, about 15% was the percentage of people working part-time in Northern Ireland. This figure declined by around 2%. Wales had the biggest percentage of part-time workers in 1980, with over 30% and rose to about 35% in 2010 which was a slight increase.

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In 1980, about 15% was the percentage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 working part-time in Northern Ireland. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
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 declined by around 2%. Wales had the biggest percentage of part-time workers in 1980, with over 30% and rose to about 35% in 2010 which was a slight increase. 