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The bar chart compares the export revenues of a nation from 5 different sectors between 2015 and 2016, while the table illustrates their percentage change in the same period.

The bar chart compares the export revenues of a nation from 5 different sectors between 2015 and 2016, while the table illustrates their percentage change in the same period. Ogwap
The bar chart compares the export revenues of a nation from 5 different sectors between 2015 and 2016, while the table illustrates their percentage change in the same period. Overall, export earnings increased in all categories, with the exception of gems and jewellery. It is also noticeable that while petroleum products and engineered goods contributed the most to national export revenues, textiles saw the most significant percentage change despite being the lowest earner. The two top exports were petroleum products and engineered products. However, while the first category went up by 3%, from about $61 billion in 2015 to around $63 billion in 2016, the latter grew at a faster rate of 8. 5%, rising from nearly $58 billion to approximately $62 billion in the same time. The other exports had much lower figures. Gems and jewellery, the only export witnessing a drop, declined by 5. 18% from $43 billion in 2015 to around $41 billion in 2016. While agriculture saw a very tiny increase in value, hovering around $30 billion, textiles had the greatest rise of 15. 24%. It climbed from approximately $26 billion, the lowest of all categories in 2015, to just over $30 billion, which was the roughly the same value of agriculture in 2016.
The bar chart compares the
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revenues of a nation from 5
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sectors between 2015 and 2016, while the table illustrates their percentage
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change
in the same period.

Overall
,
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earnings increased in all categories,
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with the exception of
gems and
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jewellery
. It is
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noticeable that while petroleum products and engineered
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goods
contributed the most to national
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revenues, textiles
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the most significant percentage
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despite being the lowest earner.

The two top
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were petroleum products and engineered products.
However
, while the
first
category went up by 3%, from about $61
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in 2015 to around $63
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in 2016, the latter grew at a faster rate of 8. 5%, rising from
nearly
$58
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to approximately $62
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in the same time.

The other
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had much lower figures. Gems and
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jewellery
, the
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witnessing a drop, declined by 5. 18% from $43
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in 2015 to around $41
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in 2016. While agriculture
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tiny increase in value, hovering around $30
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, textiles had the greatest rise of 15. 24%. It climbed from approximately $26
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, the lowest of all categories in 2015, to
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over $30
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, which was
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the roughly the
same value of agriculture in 2016.
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares the export revenues of a nation from 5 different sectors between 2015 and 2016, while the table illustrates their percentage change in the same period.

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