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let you describe a day in your life

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I'm a high school student, so most of my day is spent for studying. Every morning, I usually wake up at 6: 0. After doing personal hygiene and preparing my uniform, I have breakfast at 6: 20 a. m. My mother is the one who cooks delicious and nutritious foods for the whole family, and I also help her setting up the table. Then, I go to school by bicycle at 6: 45. My school starts at 7 o’clock, I have two short breaks at 8. 30 and 10. 20. I have 5 classes in the morning, and sometimes those classes can be very stressful for students to keep up. When I finish my morning classes at 11: 15 I return home to take a rest before starting my afternoon classes. I have 4 more classes in the afternoon, and they finish at 4. 50. I always spend my time on cooking dinner for my small family and we usually have dinner at 7. 0 p. m. After that, I always study and go to bed before 11: 00 pm. On weekends, I usually watch a movie or go out with my family. My life of a student seems to be busy, but luckily I love spending time for both school and family.

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. I have 4 more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfamilycollectiondivisionschooldegreeleague
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