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The bar chart compares information of most visited places (cinema, theater, library and zoo) by Canadians, migrants born in other countries, migrants from English Speaking countries and migrants born in Canada. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, cinema was the most frequently visited place, while theater was the least one. A brief description follows

The bar chart compares information of most visited places (cinema, theater, library and zoo) by Canadians, migrants born in other countries, migrants from English Speaking countries and migrants born in Canada. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, cinema was the most frequently visited place, while theater was the least one. A brief description follows 7LOX5
The bar chart compares information of most visited places (cinema, theater, library and zoo) by Canadians, migrants born in other countries, migrants from English Speaking countries and migrants born in Canada. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, cinema was the most frequently visited place, while theater was the least one. A brief description follows. It’s clear that exactly 50% of Canadian migrants from different countries went to the cinema, while the index of library is 5% bigger than cinema, close to 55%. On the other hand, only 10% of the migrants preferred theatre. The number of zoo visitor’s triples in comparison with theatre, about 35%. In terms of immigrants from English speaking countries, cinema was mostly visited locale, approximately 65%, on contrary, theatre shows just above 20%. Library saw an increase for almost 10% compared with theatre, 40% respectively. People from English Speaking countries demonstrated the highest percentage in going to the zoo (50%). Coming down to people born in Canada, they as well as previous migrants liked cinemas the most (70%), however, the number of theater visitors decreases for 5 times, 20%. 35% of Canadians went to the library; and around 43% visited zoo
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