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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The given bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced and consumed in the top ten countries in the year 2014. Overall, among the first ten countries, china and the USA produced and consumed the largest amount of electricity with a remarkable difference compared to others. Also, with the exception of Germany in other countries, the amount of production was more than consumption. Regarding the top five countries, In China as a top rank, electricity was produced 5, 398 billion kW and consumed 5, 222 billion kW, and followed by in the USA, as the second one, it was 4, 099 and 3, 866, respectively. Russia and Japan and India witnessed more or less 900 billion kW production. On contrary, there was more difference in consumption, between around 1000 related to Russia and 700 belong to India. Turning to the rest of the countries, production was ranging from 618. 9 to 485. 1 that Canada was the largest amount and Korea, Rep the least. Whilst consumed electricity was about 450 billion kW which Germany possessed the most consumption, 582, 5, and more than the generation of that.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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