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The diagram shows how the water cycle runs.

The diagram shows how the water cycle runs. PN2B
The pictorial diagram illustrate how the water cycle functions. To begin with the help of sun's heat the evaporation from the sea transfer into invisible water vapour and it is pushed by wind. These vapour take places in form of clouds and further these clouds causeing in the form of rain in the land surface. Moreover, rain down in porous rock and flow into groundwater and these groundwater flow into rivers, lakes, seas. Non porous rock flow in sea and rain in downstream in the form of a river flows into sea and hence, the cycle is continuous. Overall, water cycle is natural and have four stages. The sun's heat is needs for this cycle to run.
The pictorial diagram illustrate how the water
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functions.

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of sun's heat the evaporation from the
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transfer into invisible water
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vapour
and it
is pushed
by wind. These
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vapour
take places in form of clouds and
further
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causeing
in the form of rain in the land surface.

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, rain down in porous rock and
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flow
into groundwater and
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these groundwater
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flow
into rivers, lakes,
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seas
.
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Non porous
rock
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flow
in
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sea
and rain in downstream in the form of a river
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flows
into
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sea
and
hence
, the
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cycle
is continuous.

Overall
, water
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is natural and have four stages. The sun's heat is needs for this
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to run.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how the water cycle runs.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
117 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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