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Transport methods in a European city 1960-2000

The bar graph illustrates major four travelling methods used to travel in a European city in the year 1960, 1980, 2000. According to the chart in 1960 most travelers preferred to walk and its just below 35 per cent. And also used cars, bus or bike as a travelling method is around 5 per cent, 18 per cent and 25 per cent respectively. By the way car had a dramatically increment from 1960 to 2000. In 2000 it had been just passing the 35 percent.

The bar graph illustrates major four travelling methods This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to travel in a European city in the year 1960, 1980, 2000. According to the chart in 1960 most travelers preferred to walk and its This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below 35 per cent. And also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 cars, bus or bike as a travelling method is around 5 per cent, 18 per cent and 25 per cent respectively
. By the way car had a You used an adverb (‘dramatically’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘increment’) instead of another adjective.
dramatically increment
 from 1960 to 2000. In The comma is probably missing here: “2000, it”.2000, it
2000 it
 had been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 passing the 35 percent. 