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The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004.

The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. kgQ7O
This bar chart illustrates the number of students who took three different courses since 2001 until 2004. Overall, the pupils in course A and B did not change much over the 4-year period, while students in course C dramatically rose in 2004. The students in course A in 2001 were around 4 million people, but then dropped to approximately 2. 5 million people in 2002. After that, the number continuously increased after that year until reached 4. 5 million students in 2004. On the other hand, attenders in course B fluctuated from about 2. 5 million people in 2001 to around 2. 8 million people in 2004. In the last group, students who enrolled in course C increased a lot after in 2002, and finally reached 5 million students in 2004. The highest number of students was students of course C in 2004, which is 5 million people. On the other hand, the lowest number of pupils was found to be the attenders of course B in 2003.
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then dropped to approximately 2. 5
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in 2002. After that, the
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B fluctuated from about 2. 5
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in 2001 to around 2. 8
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in 2004. In the last group,
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C in 2004, which is 5
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004.

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