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The bar graph indicates sales figures or reading materials from 2002 to 2012 . Write a report to university lecturer describing the information shown below .

The bar graph indicates sales figures or reading materials from 2002 to 2012. Write a report to university lecturer describing the information shown below. Yd1QN
The horizontal bar chart illustrates about reading books which have four types along with their sales ratio from the year 2002 to 2012. The figures of sales are present in thousands. Overall, as it is evident from the information that customers have shown more preferences for history books as well as least sales is showed for hobbies book. In the year 2002, less ratio was recorded for hobbies books and history books were sold above 4000 copies. As per 2004, hobbies books had been sold highest in numbers as this year also had least sales ratio of hobbies book. As in the year 2006, entertainment books and art books were being sold with same numbers. It is clearly seen in the year 2008 that history books had sold at highest ratio than others. While, hobbies books sales were recorded with minimum copies for the years 2008, 2010, 2012. Arts books sold with 4000 copies as it had increased its scale in sales in the last year.
The horizontal bar chart illustrates about reading
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books
which have four types along with their
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sales
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ratio
from the
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year
2002 to 2012. The figures of
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sales
are present in thousands.
Overall
, as it is evident from the information that customers have shown more preferences for history
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books
as well
as least
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sales
is
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showed
for
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hobbies
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book
. In the
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year
2002, less
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ratio
was recorded
for
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hobbies
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books
and history
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books
were sold
above 4000 copies. As per 2004,
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hobbies
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books
had
been sold
highest in numbers as this
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year
also
had
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least
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sales
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ratio
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hobbies
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book
. As in the
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year
2006, entertainment
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books
and art
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books
were
being sold
with same numbers. It is
clearly
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seen
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year
2008 that history
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books
had sold at highest
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ratio
than others. While,
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hobbies
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books
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sales
were recorded
with minimum copies for the years 2008, 2010, 2012. Arts
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books
sold with 4000 copies as it had increased its scale in
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sales
in the last
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year
.
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IELTS academic The bar graph indicates sales figures or reading materials from 2002 to 2012. Write a report to university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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