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The table illustrates how much money was spent on five formats of advertising of four distinct car companies in the UK in 2002.

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The table illustrates how much money was spent on five formats of advertising of four distinct car companies in the UK in 2002. ​​Overall, Renault generally devoted the largest amount of money to advertising activities. In addition, TV was the most popular advertising type, while the opposite was true for cinema advertising. ​​In 2002, Certirizine allotted $70 million for TV advertisement, while Vauxhall invested $65 million in the same platform. Meanwhile, the figures for Renault and Rover were relatively lower, with $59 million for the former and $45 million for the latter. Regarding press advertising, the amount of money spent on this format by Renault was $45 million, which was slightly higher than that of Rover, at $38 million. By contrast, the figures for Vauxhall and Cetirizine were only $8 million and $12 million respectively. ​​Cinema advertising and outdoor promotion were paid an insignificant amount of money, with under $10
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in the UK in 2002.

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, Renault
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devoted the largest amount of
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to advertising activities.
In addition
, TV was the most popular advertising type, while the opposite was true for cinema advertising.

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Certirizine
allotted $70
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million
for TV advertisement, while
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Vauxhall
invested $65
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in the same platform. Meanwhile, the figures for Renault and Rover were
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lower, with $59
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for the former and $45
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million
for the latter. Regarding press advertising, the amount of
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spent on this format by Renault was $45
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million
, which was
slightly
higher than that of Rover, at $38
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million
. By contrast, the figures for
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Vauxhall
and
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Cetirizine
were
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$8
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and $12
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​​Cinema advertising and outdoor promotion
were paid
an insignificant amount of
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, with under $10
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