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The illustrations depict the transformation in the layout of a student common room over the past five years. Overall, this room has undergone significant renovation as more facilities and amenities were added, providing a more convenient and comfortable environment for the student. At the uppermost area of the room are a row of domestic appliances. In the past, this involved a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave, a refrigerator arranged respectively from left to right. They have remained practically intact till today, with the exception of the second bench as it was replaced by another microwave. A new drink machine was installed at the back of the room, near the refrigerator. In the bottom right corner, a television was furnished as well as three armchairs facing toward the TV. In the middle of the room, there used to be four identical round tables; each table goes with six chairs. In the present, the table and chair set closest to the left of the entrance was removed, making way for a nine-piece rectangular table. The downer right set was also replaced by a bench exclusively catered for laptop users.
The illustrations depict the transformation in the layout of a student common
room
over the past five years.
Overall
, this
room
has undergone significant renovation as more facilities and amenities were
added
, providing a more convenient and comfortable environment for the student.

At the uppermost area of the
room
are a row of domestic appliances. In the past, this involved a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave, a refrigerator arranged
respectively
from
left
to right. They have remained
practically
intact till
today
,
with the exception of
the second bench as it
was replaced
by another microwave. A new drink machine
was installed
at the back of the
room
, near the refrigerator.

In the bottom right corner, a television
was furnished
as well
as three armchairs facing toward the TV. In the middle of the
room
, there
used
to be four identical round
tables
; each
table
goes with six chairs.
In
the present, the
table
and chair set closest to the
left
of the entrance
was removed
, making way for a nine-piece rectangular
table
. The downer right set was
also
replaced by a bench exclusively catered for laptop users.
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189 words
6.0
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