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The Bar Chart Below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featres, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The given bar chart elucidates causes of stress among Canadian in diverse age groups. On an overall, people aged from 25-54 suffer mostly due over work and lack of funds, while people aged 64 and above are affected by stress due to no particular reason and health issues. Causes of stress change as age advances: while money and overwork affects people aged from 25-54 most, 25% and 15%, they influence lesser and lesser in higher age groups, in age groups 25-64 and 55-64 15% and 12% respectively, individuals accept these causes as reasons, while people aged 65 and above seem least affected. However, no particular reason is the primary source of worries for individuals aged 75 and above, 35% and 65-74, 32%. Other main source of anxiety for these age groups is personal health 24% and 15% respectively. These factors seem to influence lesser number of people in younger age groups though percentage of individuals in age group 55-64 report all at almost similar levels.
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bar chart elucidates causes of
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among Canadian in diverse
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. On an
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people
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from 25-54 suffer
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due over work and lack of funds, while
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64 and above are
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affected
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stress
due to no particular reason and health issues.

Causes of
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as
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advances: while money and overwork affects
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people
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aged
from 25-54 most, 25% and 15%, they influence lesser and lesser in higher
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age
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, in
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25-64 and 55-64 15% and 12%
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, individuals accept these causes as reasons, while
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people
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65 and above seem least
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75 and above, 35% and 65-74, 32%. Other main source of anxiety for these
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age
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groups
is personal health 24% and 15%
respectively
. These factors seem to influence lesser number of
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people
in younger
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though percentage of individuals in
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55-64 report all at almost similar levels.
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IELTS academic The Bar Chart Below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada.

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3 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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