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The bar chart below shows a number of well-known apps downloaded as of January 2020 in both the App and Google Play stores , in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows a number of well-known apps downloaded as of January 2020 in both the App and Google Play stores, in the USA. eADmJ
The bar chart illustrates two foremost apps installed as of January 2020 in the app stores and google play located in the US. It is evident that Zoom was the most popular app of all. The opposite was true for Walmal. It is also notable that there was a huge disparity in Youtube and Gmail according to its number of download in both apps. As can be seen from the chart, the number of installations for Tiktok stood at 25 million, more than 10 million in comparison with Messenger. Facebook, Instagram, Youtube, Googlemeet simultaneously stood at approximately 12, 5 million in 2020 with more installations on App store than Google play. Meanwhile, Cash app and Netflix both had a total number of around 12 million users with higher downloads on App store. Looking at the chart in more detail, House party, Door dash, Amazon, Whatsapp, was close to 9 million respectively. Disney and snapchat both stood at around 8 million, followed by Gmail and Wish at nearly 7 million and the last three apps at around 6 million.
The bar chart illustrates two foremost apps installed as of January 2020 in the app stores and google play located in the US.

It is evident that Zoom was the most popular app of all. The opposite was true for
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Walmal
. It is
also
notable that there was a huge disparity in
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Youtube
and Gmail according to its number of download in both apps.

As can be
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from the chart, the number of installations for
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Tiktok
stood at 25
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, more than 10
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million
in comparison
with Messenger. Facebook, Instagram,
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Youtube
,
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Googlemeet
simultaneously
stood at approximately 12, 5
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million
in 2020 with more installations on App store than Google play. Meanwhile, Cash app and Netflix both had a total number of around 12
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million
users with higher downloads on App store.

Looking at the chart in more detail,
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House
party, Door dash, Amazon,
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Whatsapp
, was close to 9
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respectively
. Disney and
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snapchat
both stood at around 8
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, followed by Gmail and Wish at
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7
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and the last three apps at around 6
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