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birth rate chart is increasing in so many diffrent countries

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The bar chart represent the five countries birth rate in 1970 and 2000. It is evident from the bar chart that mexico is the only country which has no changes in birth rate. In 1970, all country has higher birth rate than 2000 excluding somalia. India has around 5 child per woman and thailand has approximately 4. 5 child per woman whereas somalia and mexico has similar around 3 birth per woman and the spain was at the lowest with around 2. 5 birth per woman. In 2000, all countries birthrate changes and mostly that is lesser than 1970 but only the mexico which is same as 1970 and somalia was with higher than 1970 growth which is aorund 3. 5 birth per woman. India birth rate is around 3 birth per woman and thailand birth rate is half in 2000 than 1970 which is around 2. 5. Where the spain is also changes its birth rate around 50 percentage and now its birth rate is around 1. 5.
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IELTS academic birth rate chart is increasing in so many diffrent countries

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